Tuesday, February 1, 2011

02.07 Free Choice Blog Assessment

              R.I.P. Gregory
  It has been a little over two years since Gregory Allen Jr. lost his life on November 11, 2009. It all started with an argument over a bike, and then ended with two bullets in Gregory's chest. He passed away later that night in the hospital. Gregory was a senior at Middleton High School and had plans of joining the army after his graduation. He was only 17 years old at the time of his death. He will always be remembered...


                          My personal reaction:


  This was my second only my second blog collaboration but it is one that will never be forgotten. I never met Gregory, but from reading this story I imagine can he was a pretty cool guy. He had his life planned, but sadly someone else had already planned it for him. But, Gregory is in a better place. Even though we can't see him now, we will be able to see him again someday...


  I think that the author's intent was to inform the readers of her personal feelings of the loss of her cousin. The pattern of organization that I saw most of  was cause and effect.

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